Start with the reader, not with your résumé.
Most bios go wrong before the first sentence. We open a blank field and immediately start asking: what should I say about myself? A better question is: what does this reader need to know about me here?
A conference speaker page, an Instagram profile, a portfolio and a proposal all introduce the same person, but they do not have the same job.
The three things I want from a professional bio.
Notice what is missing: a list of every qualification, every job and every adjective you have ever been given. A bio is selective by design.
The easiest way to sound more human is to delete vague praise.
Words such as passionate, innovative, dynamic and visionary are not forbidden. They are simply expensive words: they take up space but often provide very little evidence.
The second version is less grand and much more useful. We know what she does, who she does it for and roughly what problem she solves.
One proof point beats five adjectives.
If you have been working for fifteen years, say so. If you specialise in museum exhibitions, mention that. If your work is used by universities, NGOs or startups, that can help a reader place you.
Proof does not have to be prestigious. It has to be relevant.
How personal should a professional bio be?
Enough to create a person, not so much that the reader forgets why they came. A photographer might mention that she walks cities collecting accidental compositions. A developer might mention restoring old synthesizers. A consultant does not need to announce a love of coffee merely because bios traditionally seem to require caffeine.
The best personal detail usually reinforces the voice of the work instead of sitting beside it like a decorative sticker.
My final edit is usually subtraction.
- Read the bio out loud. Anything you would never say deserves suspicion.
- Circle the first concrete noun and verb. Get to them faster.
- Delete repeated ideas, especially if two sentences both say you are good at your job.
- Check every fact. Generated text can sound confident while being wrong.
- Cut one final sentence and see whether the bio improves.
Often it does.
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